Many students thoughtfully analyzed the online presentation and developed good suggestions for making improvements. Most students said they would recommend this video for others to watch, but some said it was too boring!
Most all students grabbed the main messages from the online presentation and learned some basics about email marketing.
I particularly enjoyed the overall good use of Basic English! Please be cautious -- don't let your writing get sloppy, and don't forget to check for "agreement," i.e. singular nouns require singular verbs, plural nouns require plural verbs, etc.
To help you improve going forward, I've attached two sample critiques for your review. Both were well done . . . pay attention to the style of these writers.
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